1.
Tidal flow fills the inlet, pushes
upstream and quiets the brook.
In the marsh a murmur of geese.
Owl on silent wing threads darkness
through darkness.
An utterance slips into the water;
– swims toward me.
2.
Night by the river
stepping away from the fire
– moon still as stone.
3.
Everyone I have ever been
sits around this fire, smelling like smoke
and thinking – this is it.
I walk to the river with the boy
who was afraid of the dark. The night
receives us with warm indifference;
sacred and familiar.
Are we an elder now, the boy asks
the old man we are becoming.
Sometimes, he replies. But usually
– we are just older.

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Today’s prompt from Ingrid at dVerse is “Poetics: Poetry of Place and Space”. The task is to write the poetry of places and/or spaces which inspire you the most.
I enjoyed reading about your sacred space and see the charm of it.
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Thanks!
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You’re welcome.
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Very well written! What a wonderful place to go to out in the wild of nature!
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Thank you!
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You are welcome!
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oh wow – I love the idea of an owl threading darkness through darkness – how superb an image – and I love the last poem too – the idea of all that one becomes – the way one can now sit and enjoy the darkness, the stillness, lit by a campfire and how there is the “wisdom of the ages” – represented, perhaps literally, through the generations, and/or metaphorically –
what I appreciate so much is how you capture the feeling of the surrounds – the amazing beauty of N.S. – I have a friend who has recently moved back home there and I’m always so enthralled when she shares her stories and adventures about the Maritimes. I’ve travelled a bit through Canada – but West – maybe one day I’ll be able to visit the East coast – the pull has always been hypnotic and magnetic for me – and I think your words and creations bring it to life, capturing “essences” of such beauty and space –
Cheers!
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Thanks very much for your kind thoughts and comment! The owl image was taken directly from standing in the darkness as an owl passed close by, literally darkness threading through darkness. A simple, beautiful moment. So glad you picked that up!
Nova Scotia really is a very special place. Love it here and would highly recommended a visit. Unfortunately, the north shore, where we live was quite devastated last fall by Hurricane Fiona. Including our little property. Large, large tracts of forest were flattened. Absolutely heart-breaking.
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I too have had owls threading darkness – I live in the Laurentians – surrounded by trees and forest – and I’ve even called out to them and had them coming swooping in at dusk. It’s surreal. There’s nothing like Nature and her creatures to set one a bit tipsy.
I’m so sorry to hear that you were direct hit by Fiona – the damage and destruction was/is so astounding. But nature will recover – with infinite patience and time, and maybe, a helping hand. I hope, as I was saying to my recently relocated friend, that the different cities and communities come up with “free tree/sapling” give-away programs to help with this process. (Last May, we had that crazy wind derecho storm blow through here and it was terrible – trees down all over the place – I think I still have pine needles and saw dust in my hair from all the post-op clean-up. Lots of damage all around. But of course, nothing like Fiona – which was just epic. Heartbreaking really.)
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Beautiful my friend, love reading your thoughts, so soothing.
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Thanks Rick! Great to hear from you. Had a lovely visit with Sian this morning. Looking very forward to seeing you again soon.
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the first stanza is so quiet and soothing, and the second taking us deeper into this special place and it’s relationship to those who inhabit it; special; I love poems about special places and your ‘little neck of the woods’ in Nova Scotia is certainly that —
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Thanks John, I’m glad you enjoyed these and that I managed to successfully convey some of the meaning of this place and space I inhabit. The poems span some years and I quite appreciate that in reworking and reading, all three can take me right back to the moments they describe.
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you’ve done a great job evoking that time and place —
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These are completely beautiful and work well as a series. A lovely mix of description and personal. Gorgeous.
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Thank you so much. Very pleased that you enjoyed them!
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Fantastic! I especially liked the third section.
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Thanks Bob! I can so easily remember the inspiration of that third one. Sitting alone by the fire. Probably began by thinking about how afraid of the dark I was as a kid and that now the night and darkness are my companions. That no doubt led to thinking of all those different people I have been and continue to become. Walking my musing through the darkness, down to the river (which would have terrified the child). Really glad you picked this one out!
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Some amazing lines (“An utterance slips into the water”) and I especially love the third poem, with “everyone I have ever been” and “the boy/who was afraid of the dark” and “Are we an elder now, the boy asks”! They transport me.
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Thanks Lynne. So glad you liked these! I can still see and feel the animal sliding into the water a very short distance across from me. Stand long enough in the darkness and the night opens itself up. Or perhaps it’s we who open up to the night…
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Thanks for sharing the beauty with us, it’s majestic 👏👏👏
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Thank you for your kind words.
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These are wonderful Chris! Never been to Nova Scotia but your description is beautiful.
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Thanks very much Rob.
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Wonderful, especially this stanza:
“Everyone I have ever been
sits around this fire, smelling like smoke
and thinking – this is it.”
Great Blue Heron (bathed in late-day light?) … evocative as well.
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I see your heron caption … dusk it is ✍
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Thanks John!
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I really love them all, and in combination, they are really striking, I especially love how you seem to break up time in the last one by being both man, and boy… and that conclusion… we are only older.
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Thanks very much Björn.
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Chris thank you for sharing this exquisite poetry … chills all over as I read “everyone I have ever been” ~ going to keep those words close for some time.
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Thank you Helen!
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I like the perspective you have chosen here, and the imagery:
‘Owl on silent wing threads darkness
through darkness.’
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This is absolutely stunning! Wow! I especially admire; “An utterance slips into the water;– swims toward me.”💖💖
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Thanks very! So glad you enjoyed the poem.
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This is beautiful, it’s like a meditation. I was there, taking in your view with the boy who was afraid of the dark and the wise man he had grown into
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Thanks very much Teri!
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Oh, lovely! I could live there too. Owls, a stream, wetlands and night quiet. Who needs more?
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Thanks! It is lovely here and I sure don’t need much more. Unfortunately our entire area was quite devastated by Hurricane Fiona last fall. It took me until the new year to put grieving aside and get back out and try and find joy somehow in the wreckage.
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Oh! I’m sorry. Another tragedy that didn’t make it into our news. Was your house damaged or was it the forest and trees that have been destroyed?
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Miraculously our house, barn and greenhouse went unscathed. Despite more or less all of the trees, including some giants being downed. We live on just under an acre and over the years managed to turn it into quite a natural oasis and addition to the surrounding ecosystems. We created a lot of natural privacy. That’s all gone now. I worked for weeks on cleanup. Curious what rebuilding and replanting will look like in the coming months.
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It will be a lot of work, but an acre is feasible. What tree varieties do you have? You’ll want some quick-growing deciduous I imagine to get it going.
We have about five acres, mostly old meadow that has never been cultivated. Planting hedges and trees around the edges is taking forever.
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We have and had a nice mix of hardwood (ash, maple and birch) along with spruce and white pine. You can be sure we’ll be doing a relatively quick-growing mix. I will do some building as well. We’re fortunate to back onto the river (no houses on the other side) and mouth of a brook. While so much has been devastated there are still sources of beauty and wonder. The ocean is also at our doorstep. I’ve counted 116 species of birds from the back deck. Curious how the songbirds will react to the new spaces…
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It sounds like Paradise! Adding more plant species should only increase the bird population.
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My wife is a passionate gardener… we’ve got that well covered 🙂
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We used to have proper gardens with good black loam. The soil here is heavy clay, and it dries like cement. And we have dogs. We’ve managed to plant a narrow strip around the house. It looks pretty enough.
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“Everyone I have ever been
sits around this fire, smelling like smoke
and thinking – this is it.” – I love this.
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Thanks Ali!
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